My name is Caitlyn and over the summer I'll be reading and commenting on Your blog as part of the Summer Learning Journey.
I like the Charity that You have chosen and why You have chosen them. Maybe next time You could add a little bit more information about what the Air Rescue does and You could add a picture of maybe their logo?
keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more of Your work!
Thanks for sharing your blog post about the charity you are interested in. I think Air Rescue are a great organisation, especially in a Country like New Zealand where we have such diverse and (sometimes) dangerous landscapes. Sometimes a helicopter is the only way to help.
Just so you know, to get full points for this activity we need you to add a little more information. Perhaps you could add 2-3 sentences about how Air Rescue help people, and why they are important? I would love to hear more of your thoughts on this :)
Keep up the blogging Will, I am interested to read more of your posts.
Hello Will,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Caitlyn and over the summer I'll be reading and commenting on Your blog as part of the Summer Learning Journey.
I like the Charity that You have chosen and why You have chosen them. Maybe next time You could add a little bit more information about what the Air Rescue does and You could add a picture of maybe their logo?
keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more of Your work!
Caitlyn :)
Good morning Will,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your blog post about the charity you are interested in. I think Air Rescue are a great organisation, especially in a Country like New Zealand where we have such diverse and (sometimes) dangerous landscapes. Sometimes a helicopter is the only way to help.
Just so you know, to get full points for this activity we need you to add a little more information. Perhaps you could add 2-3 sentences about how Air Rescue help people, and why they are important? I would love to hear more of your thoughts on this :)
Keep up the blogging Will, I am interested to read more of your posts.
Beren