Thursday, December 20, 2018


  1. Hi Will

    Welcome to the Summer Learning Journey for the 2018 summer. My name is Allie and I am the cluster manager for Toki Pounamu. I will be commenting on your blog over the summer.

    This is a fantastic presentation of your first activity. I really like it. It is so eye catching and fun to watch your slide show.
    I like that we are named after a really cut bird. It makes us unique and we are well know around the world as kiwis.

    I am looking forward to reading your blog over the summer and see what other amazing presentations that you post.

    Keep up the great work

    Until next time

    Allie :)

    1. Thanks Allie, I have been away on holiday but now i'm back home now and looking forward to completing the rest of my learning journey and reading any more comments on my blog.Thanks Will

  2. Kia Ora Will! I really like how you put pictures in. It makes it look very unique and pop out more. I think you have done really well.
    I also like how you explained about what you were saying and making it easier to understand.
    I'm doing the Summer Learning Journey as well, so if you would like to see my blog, feel free to! It is linked to my name.
    Keep up the amazing work, and remember, just keep posting!

    1. Thanks for your encouraging words. I have been away without my chrome book but I have time to look at your blog too. Thanks Will

  3. Hi will, I really like your imagination you put into that and the right pictures and maybe next time you could make the words stick out more so you can make it easier for people to read.

  4. Hi Stevie thanks for looking at my blog and for making suggestions to help me improve it. Thanks Will


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